translation comment # 31 Barbara

Dearest Emma

thanks for your novel :-). I discovered it by chance reading the review on this bog and I am glad I trusted it.

I really appreciated Beyond Innocence and I am sorry few people focused their attention on certain "words". I am going to explain because I am not criticizing you in the least.

I think this self-confidence of Edward it is just perfect for him a man that is so passionate and overwhelming.

Had the scenes been more "delicate"

or the words more "elaborate" I would have found it not consistent with Edward's strenght.

There are plenty of feelings and the novel gave me a sensation of sweetness and strenght coming

from all the characters! All of them had to fight their demons and you, dear Emma, gave me so much and made me live all their feelings, fears and let's say it, victories!!!

Can't wait for the next book... and Nic umm I am already intrigued.

Hug you.

Non ti dispiace se ho tradotto io vero Barbara? Ciao